Hi Magnus !!! Thanks For your Bt, and to take the time to listen and comments..
I have chosen for the change in my play... use of the vibrato..break of battery in harmonics, then topic which will be repeat and which will be followed variations like sweep, alternate picking return in chromatism... lick in octave... I hope you will like it....
Ibanez Js 1200 red, behringer v amp pro...
Bon jai opté pour du changement dans mon jeu...utilisation du vibrato..break de batterie en harmoniques, puis theme qui se repétera et qui sera suivit de variations comme du sweep, aller retour en chromatisme....lick en octave...voila jespere que ca vous plaira!!!!
et bah, toi aussi tu as fait tres fort...
oui bien que dire ? C'est gros ! C'est énorme ! Mais je ne suis pas fan du vibrato et je trouve que tu en colles beaucoup. Mais bon, c'est juste une question de goût....comme je l'ai dit sur le forum, je n'ai pas grand chose a vous apporter, je commente juste sur des questions de goûts personnels.
le son est sympa
la répétition du thème est un peu monotone une petite harmonisation aurait permis de varier un peu
l' ensemble est bien fait
bravo
Ben honnêtement je trouve que le coup du vibrato c'est pas encore çà. Tes notes flottent, on a une impression de jeu faux. Mais bon tout le monde semblent apprècier donc fait comme si je n'avais rien dis.
C'est ça la magie des défis 
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i am désoled yellow ! but i adère pas trop meme si je reconnais qu'y a du boulot mais le touché me choque un peu... désolé !
Hi, Yellowshadow!
Well played!
Really nice that you repeat your ideas, that makes it sound like it is all tied together more.
You have some great ideas for cool licks in your playing, put they are not always perfectly executed. The lick that starts at 00:42 is the one that I like the best.
Your sweeping technique is great at 00:34.
The only thing that I don’t like that much in your solo is the intonation in your playing.
For me that is the hardest, but also the most important part of playing guitar.
I hope that you understand what I mean with intonation? Good intonation is a thing that no players have, until they start to think about it.
But it makes more difference in how it sounds then any playing technique does.
A good way to practice it is to play really slow and simple melodies over really slow chord progressions. Like recording kid tunes in a very slow tempo and play just the simple melody over it, or playing the vocal line in normal pop ballades.
Then the trick is to really think about how you play, to listen to how you should play the notes to make them sing better with the chords behind it. To make them in tune with the music that you are playing over.
Playing a C note over a C chord can sound very different depending on how you play it and what kind of vibrato used when it rings out.
It is a sort of thing that don’t come natural for 99% of all guitar players, we all have to think about it, all the time. And it never gets really good until we start to think about it and practice it.
It is a hard thing to explain when you can’t show what you mean on a guitar.
But I still think that you made a very good take over this. It is a “hard” BT to play over, sins the possibilities of what to play are so many. The chords don’t really say that much and can belong to many different keys.
/Magnus
t'as bien negocier la premiere partie la plus difficile bravo, ça sonne super...apres les sweeps sont cool...apres j'aime un peu moins, mais tu as bien assuré
Salut Tom!!
Je t'attendais d'un jour a l'autre sur ce bt! 
Ca l'fait bien, pas trop de deboule (qq sweep quand meme, hein, faut pas deconner non plus!! ), mais y'a pas mal de feeling dans ton impro.
Ton impro est originale de par ton utilisation des harmoniques et du vibrato!
Terrible les sweep !! ( belle technique )
j'aime bien y'a plein de bonnes idée et tres beau son.
manque un poil d'enchainements entre les différentes parties mais bon.... c'est super !!
bravo !!
dvram1
super en un mot!!!